I think this is a great video: makes its point formally (something I always like). My bet is there is one last version of this in there, and I'd love to brainstorm with you in person about how to kick it over the top. I feel like it still takes us longer than we need to get to you, so the issue may be structure. The ideas are great, and your talking head is too. Maybe its having some of your subjects also talking in color at the end? Or turning the black and white images to color? Just some thoughts.
I think this is a great video: makes its point formally (something I always like). My bet is there is one last version of this in there, and I'd love to brainstorm with you in person about how to kick it over the top. I feel like it still takes us longer than we need to get to you, so the issue may be structure. The ideas are great, and your talking head is too. Maybe its having some of your subjects also talking in color at the end? Or turning the black and white images to color? Just some thoughts.
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